Finally, I’ve resigned.
Looking back, my time at the company feels like a long journey.
When I first started, I was afraid of everything.
But time flew by, and now, I don’t feel that fear anymore.
That’s because my coworkers were always kind to me.
I’m truly grateful for them.
Even though I’m leaving, I hope we’ll meet again and stay in a good relationship.
And to myself —
You did a good job. :)
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“I think that my company life is so long time.”
• 어색한 구조
• “my time at the company feels like a long journey”
감성적이고 자연스럽게 경험을 되돌아보는 표현
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“I afraid of doing everything.”
• be 동사 빠짐
• “I was afraid of everything.”
더 간결하고 정확해요
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“But time flies, I never worry about it now.”
• 시제와 흐름을 자연스럽게 바꾸면:
“But time flew by, and now, I don’t feel that fear anymore.”
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“Every coworkers are very kind of me.”
• “every” + 복수형은 안 어울림 “all coworkers” 또는 “my coworkers”
• “kind of me” “kind to me”가 정확한 표현
• “My coworkers were always kind to me.”
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“I hope to see again as good relationship.”
• 문법적으로 어색
• “I hope we’ll meet again and stay in a good relationship.”
“좋은 관계로 다시 만나길 바래요”의 자연스러운 표현
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마지막 문장 칭찬:
“I want to tell myself. You did a good job :)”
이 표현은 너무 좋고 감동적이에요.
그대로 쓰셔도 되고, 조금 더 자연스럽게는:
• “And to myself — You did a good job.”
• 또는 “I just want to say: You did well.”