Finally, the weekend is here.
This week felt really long — probably because of my new job.
I’m working on marketing to doctors to earn some income, and it takes a lot of effort, especially in the beginning.
I finished two big tasks this week, so now I can finally take a bit of a break.
I’ll get some rest tonight.
Good night. :)
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문장별 피드백 (한국어 설명)
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“Finally, welcome to weekend.”
• 문법적으로 어색함 (주어 없음)
• “Finally, the weekend is here.”
‘드디어 주말이다’를 영어에서 자주 쓰는 자연스러운 표현
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“I feel that this week is so long.”
• 시제 오류: 이번 주는 끝났으니 과거형 사용
• “This week felt really long.”
so long보다는 really long이 더 일반적
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“Because of my new job.”
• 불완전한 문장 (문장이 단독으로 존재할 수 없음)
• “— probably because of my new job.”
앞 문장과 연결해서 부드럽게 이어주기
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“marketing to doctor”
• 단수/복수 오류
• “marketing to doctors”
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“It needs to a lot of effort at first.”
• 어색한 구조
• “It takes a lot of effort, especially in the beginning.”
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“I finished two big objects”
• “objects”는 사물 의미 여기서는 “일, 과제”가 맞음
• “I finished two big tasks”
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“I could have a kind of rest.”
• 약간 부자연스러운 표현
• “so now I can finally take a bit of a break.”
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“Good night.”
• 너무 좋아요. 포근하고 자연스러운 마무리입니다!