D51- 오랜만에 본가옴

문장별 한국어 피드백:

1. Today, I went to my parent’s home in a month.

• “parent’s” 단수이므로 틀림

• parents’ home (부모님 두 분 복수 소유격)

• for the first time in a month (오랜만에 간 걸 자연스럽게 표현)

2. I started to take a rest and eat food what I wanted.

• “eat food what I wanted” 문법적으로 어색

• eat whatever I wanted 자연스럽고 자주 쓰는 표현

• take a rest 괜찮지만 relax가 더 회화적

3. Especially, bibim noodle my mother made was so delicious.

• “bibim noodle” 영어로는 bibim noodles 또는 그냥 bibim-myeon

• The bibim noodles my mom made were so delicious.

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4. So I was happy.

• 문법은 맞지만 너무 단순하게 들려요

• They made me really happy. 더 자연스럽고 감정이 잘 전달됨

5. I felt feeling of going to USA for exchange student program.

• “felt feeling” 중복, 영어에서는 자연스럽지 않음

• I started to feel the reality of going to the U.S. as an exchange student.

• “USA”보다 “the U.S.“가 더 회화에서 자주 사용돼요

6. So I should study English, but I didn’t today.

• 문법 거의 OK

• I knew I should’ve studied English today, but I didn’t. 더 자연스러움

7. I will try to study harder tomorrow.

• 좋습니다! 자연스럽고 의지 있는 표현이에요