D-49 /Everything’s gonna be ok

by Khris

자연스럽고 매끄러운 영어로 수정한 버전:


I can see where my mom had trouble.

She was worried that our household felt unstable these days.

So, we’ve decided to trust each other.

My mom and I were a bit awkward last weekend.

And now — this is probably for the best.

Everything’s gonna be okay.

Let’s keep it up!



문장별 피드백 (한국어로 설명)


1. I can see where my mom had have trouble.

• “had have” 문법적으로 불가능한 조합

• had trouble 또는 was having trouble

• 최종 문장: “I can see where my mom had trouble.”

“엄마가 왜 힘들었는지 이제 알겠어.”



2. She was worried about our household was unstable thesesdays.

• 두 문장을 붙여서 어색함

• She was worried that our household felt unstable these days.

“엄마는 요즘 우리 가정이 불안정한 것 같다고 걱정하셨어.”



3. So we’ve established to trust each others.

• “established to trust each others” 문법과 표현이 어색

• we’ve decided to trust each other

“우리는 서로를 믿기로 했다”는 의미엔 decide to 가 더 적절해요



4. My mom and I was a bit awkward on last weekend.

• was were (주어가 복수)

• on last weekend last weekend 앞에 전치사

• My mom and I were a bit awkward last weekend.



5. This is probably for the best.

• 아주 자연스럽고 완벽한 문장입니다!



6. Everything is gonna be okay.

• 이것도 좋아요! 조금 더 자연스럽게는:

• Everything’s gonna be okay. (줄여 쓰면 말투가 더 부드러워요)



7. Let keep it up!

• Let Let’s

• Let’s keep it up!

“계속 힘내자!” / “지금처럼 계속해보자!

작가의 이전글D 50 / hope