Work Experience/Professional Experience
아래는 자신의 업무 경험과 성과를 보다 효과적으로 표현할 수 있도록 정리한 영어 문구 예시 리스트입니다. 이력서를 작성할 때 단순히 맡았던 업무를 나열하기보다는, 구체적인 성과와 기여한 가치를 강조하는 것이 중요합니다. 아래 문구들을 참고하여 본인의 경험과 잘 맞는 표현을 선택하고, 필요에 맞게 수정·응용해 보세요.
Directed a team/group/organization (something difficult to manage)
Trained X new employees
Redesigned and implemented more effective company procedures which e.g. decreased
time-to-market by X amount/%
Supervised large/complex project in attaining goal X
Grew customer base by X amount/%
Cut costs by X amount/% within Y amount of time
Launched X new websites/products/campaigns
Met X national/global/industry standard within Y amount of time
Streamlined team/department operations
Published X articles/white papers/reports/books
Received X award/designation
Introduced company products to X new markets
Won X award/competition for Y consecutive years
Attained X certification
Finished in the top X percentile
Reached X objective(s) faster than competitor (internal/external)
Solved X disputes (or X internal conflicts)
First person to achieve X (or led first team to achieve X) internally/externally
Featured in website/magazine/newspaper/book
Did something that was viewed/used by many people
Piloted X program with a Y % participant completion rate
Achieved/Surpassed company/team goal of doing X by Y amount / %
Voted best/most something by association/club/group
Fixed X amount / % of bugs in company software/open-source project
아래는 CV 첨삭 컨설팅 서비스를 진행하면서 충분한 대화를 통해 지원자의 성과와 능력을 구체적으로 파악하여 수정한 예시입니다.
Before & After 예시 1
Before 문장을 보면 미국식 영어표기(영국 지원 시), 문법 오류 및 단순 업무 나열로 지원자의 능력이 드러나지 않았습니다. After 예시에서는 지원자가 이뤄낸 성과와 수상 이력 등을 액션 동사 및 수치화를 활용하여 효과적으로 보여주었습니다.
Before :
- Customized retail design from show window to POS, In-store styling with graphics, and tools. Developed experimental zones for each line launches directed agencies and related vendors.
After :
- Developed and executed effective retail marketing strategies & activities for 140 stores by analysing customer behaviour and preferences, store location and challenges, and designing promotional materials & displays to maximise store traffic, resulting in achieving greater sales results; won the Outstanding Merchandising Achievement Award
- Devised creative approaches to new product launch events including setting up an experiential testing ground enabling customers to try out exciting new technologies before purchasing, leading to a 20% growth in market share of XYZ mobile phone
Before & After 예시 2
Before :
- Designed women's swimwear and recommended new styles by sketching. Cooperated with local factories on a daily basis and coordinated sampling and production. Conducted trend/fabric research and created inspiration/design/fabric boards
After :
- Proposed ideas and illustrations of new trends and fashion designs and created style artwork and CAD presentations on Adobe Illustrator & Photoshop for seasonal collections
- Contributed to the growth in profitability through efficient production process of samples, leading to a delivery of 30 design pieces per month (from zero) to Forever 21 and a 50% increase in sales to XYZ and OPQ
- Entrusted with additional responsibility of managing garment production which involved: conducted daily communication with overseas factories (Vietnam, China) through face-to-face meeting and email to ensure clarity and progression of all design details