How many friends have you kept
from childhood?
태국에 간다고 태국어에 신경 쓰느라 영어를 또 소홀히 했다. 그러나 영어는 기본. 갈 때까지 영어도 열심히 하고 태국어도 열심히 하자. 파이팅!!!
Today’s Topic
How many friends have you kept from childhood? Tell about them.
I have three friends whom I have kept from childhood. One of them is from the same elementary school that I attended. She has been my favorite friend since we were in our first year in that school. We lived in neighborhoods. It took almost an hour by bus from our home to the school. We bought very delicious snacks with the transportation fee that we got from our parents every morning and walked and walked until we arrived home. The other friend is a friend whom I met in middle school. We were the leaders of our class because we were the tallest and we ranked first in our studies. She lives in New Youk now, so we communicate through Kakao Talk. The last friend is from my high school. I met her when I was in first year in that school. We sang in the choir of the school together. She always stood just beside me. So we had many talks during that choir class. She lives in San Francisco now, but she visits Korea so often because of her old mom. Her mother and my mother who are almost 90 years old remember us who have been friends since high school.
오홋. 그리고 내가 무척 좋아하는 첨삭 선생님으로부터 도착한 특별 멘트. 음하하하
Congratulations on completing all the steps of your lesson! We are glad to see you work hard in putting your ideas down into writing.You showed very good comprehension of the topic that was given to you. You were able to express your thoughts well with a lot of ideas and sentences. We commend you for that. You just let your ideas flow. Please be mindful of your capitalization, spelling, article usage, and word choice. Please make sure to add a comma to separate clauses in a sentence. In this case, the comma should separate two independent clauses that were connected by the conjunction “but.” Just remember to take note of the changes that were done in this essay so that you can avoid making the same errors next time. We look forward to your next essay. Have a wonderful day! ^^
대문자, 스펠링, 글 사용법, 단어 선택에 조심하라.
한 문장에서 절을 구분할 땐 꼭 콤마를 써라.
but 접속사 앞에는 콤마가 와야한다.
콤마 쓰는 게 여전히 서툴다. 자꾸 좋은 문장을 읽으며 익히도록 하자.
