영작:How often do you get into

an argument with your friends?

Today’s Topic

How often do you get into an argument with your friends? What was the cause of that?

나의 문장

Nowadays I don't have the opportunity to get into an argument with my friends. Why? I think it's because of the time flows. What I mean is that I am getting old. It makes me not to argue with my friends. I can understand what she or he does if he or she is my friend. Time solves everything. But I remember one thing. I have a best friend but now we separated. The start of our departure was started when I broke my homepage which I opened it a very early time about 1997? something like that time. My son made it to me even though he was a middle school boy but he was so smart and very talented with computers. So I can have my homepage at that time and it was very special. my friend who doesn't have her homepage starts to write her article on my homepage. I made a form for her only. But one day suddenly I became hate that home page so I broke it. I didn't think she was writing articles there. I was so angry at something so I couldn't think about her. She complained about it and we separated.

첨삭되어온 문장

Nowadays I don't have the opportunity to get into an argument with my friends. Why? I think it's because of the time flows. What I mean is that I am getting old. It makes me not to(X) argue with my friends. I can understand what she or he does if he or she is my friend. Time solves everything. But I remember one thing. I had a best friend but now we separated. The start of our departure was(We) started (drifting apart) when I broke my homepage which I opened it(at) a very early time about 1997? something like that time(in 1997).

My son made it to me even though he was a middle schoolboy(,) but he was so smart and very talented with computers. So I could have my homepage and it was very special. My friend who didn't have her homepage started to write her article on my homepage. I made a special room only for her. But one day suddenly I became(come to) hate that home page(,) so I broke it. I didn't think she was writing articles there. I was so angry at something(,) so I couldn't think about it. She complained(,) and we separated(ended our friendship).

기억해야 할 것

1. 오호 여기 to 가 필요하지 않구나. 그렇지. make가 부정사 to를 동반 않는 동사이지. 맞다. 잘 외워두자. 이 표현을. It makes me not argue with my friends.

2. 캬~ 이렇게 간단한 표현이 있었는데. 푸하하하. 우리가 금 가기 시작한 것은... 을 하기 위해 난 스타트를 쓰고 디파쳐를 쓰고 난리였는데 요렇게 깔끔하게. 하핫. 요것도 외우잣.

We started drifting apart when I broke my homepage which I opened at a very early time in 1997.

3. 1997년인가? 잘 모르겠어서 구구절절이 썼더니 간략하게 in 1997로 고쳐왔다. 하하. 그래 요런 간단함도 기억하자고.

4. 매우 이른 시기에. at a very early time 요거 순서를 잘 익혀두자. at a very early time

5. 그치그치 이상하다 했더니 became hate라니. 말도 안 된다. 요건 요렇게 고쳐서. come to hate

6. we separeted 라니 어쩐지 좀 이상하더라. 하하 첨삭해준 문장은 얼마나 깔끔한가.

We ended our friendship.

그리고 딸려온

Hi, you’ve finished Step 4!

We are certainly pleased and proud of your efforts in studying English. One thing all successful speakers and/or writers have in common is that they never give up learning no matter how difficult it may seem. Thank you for trying your best and not giving up learning.

Your writing today shows interesting and important ideas related to our topic. The language used is expressive and highly communicative. Fantastic! Keep trying until you become fluent in English but also remember the value of taking a break and reflecting from every error you have made. We are cheering for you. Take care! ^^

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