영작 Do you usually have

breakfast?

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Do you usually have breakfast? Write your favorite kinds of breakfast and who prepares for you.

나의 글

I usually don't have breakfast because I am doing on an Intermittent fasting diet. My diet asks not to eat from 7 p.m. to 11 a.m. for 16 hours. I eat my breakfast at 11 a.m. In fact, it's not skipping breakfast, it's eating late. It's possible because my husband usually wakes up very late after retiring. My favorite kinds of breakfast are eating very briefly such as bread, eggs, and fruits. Let me explain who prepares it for me. The answer is my husband and I. We are so busy at that time in the kitchen. My husband cuts apples and melon peel and heat rice cakes in a microwave. I make tomato juice and soft boiled eggs and bake the bagel bread, apply jam and butter, and put fruit, onion, and paprika. We watch T.V. during we have a meal. There are so many interesting dramas but we enjoy them only during our mealtime. It's our pleasure. After all of our meals, my husband usually makes special coffee. He is not the coffee mania but he enjoys making special taste with mixed instant coffee. His mixed coffee is very good. So I like it so much.

첨삭되어 온 글

I usually don't have breakfast because I am doing on(X) an Intermittent(intermittent) fasting diet. My diet asks not to eat(requires not eating) from 7 p.m. to 11 a.m. for 16 hours. I eat my breakfast at 11 a.m. In fact, it's not skipping breakfast, it's eating late. It's possible because my husband usually wakes up very late after retiring. My favorite kinds of breakfast are eating(food that can be eaten) very briefly(,) such as bread, eggs, and fruits. Let me explain who prepares it(them) for me. The answer is my husband and I. We are so busy at that(during this) time in the kitchen. My husband cuts apples and melon peel(, peels a melon,) and heat(heats) rice cakes in a microwave. I make tomato juice and soft boiled(, boil) eggs and(,) bake the(X) bagel bread, apply jam and butter, and put (a) fruit, (an) onion, and paprika. We watch T.V. during(TV while) we have a meal. There are so many interesting dramas(,) but we enjoy them only during our mealtime. It's our pleasure. After all of our meals(finishing our meal), my husband usually makes special coffee. He is not the(a) coffee mania(lover,) but he enjoys making (a) special taste with mixed instant coffee. His mixed coffee is very good. So I like it so much.

기억해야 될 것들

1. I am doing on a diet.라는 걸 사전에서 찾아 썼는데 on을 붙일 필요가 없구나.

I am doing an intermittent fasting diet.

2. 아무리 고유명사 같아도 문장 중에 대문자를 함부로 써서는 안 된다. intermittent fasting diet

기억하자. 고쳐준 이 문장.

I am doing an intermittent fasting diet.

3. 오홋. asks not to eat... 라 쓰고 꽤 괜찮은 표현을 알아냈네 했는데 하하 이렇게 쓰는 거 아닌가 보구나. 기억하자 좋은 표현을.

My diet requires not eating

5. 하하 맞다. 여기선 이팅보다는 후드로 하는 것이 훨씬 세련이다. 호호 eating breifly 라니 얼마나 엉망인고. 그걸 요렇게 세련되게 고쳐주었구나. 외우자.

food that can be eaten very briefly

6. such as 앞에는 콤마 써주는 것 잊지 말자.

7. 그치그치 달걀이니 과일이니 그렇게 여러 개를 나열해놓고 it이라니. 당연히 them 이 되어야지. 단수냐 복수냐도 항상 세심하게 신경 쓰도록 하자. 파이팅! 푸하하하

8. 아하. 이럴 땐 at that time 이 아니고 during this time이라고 해야 하는구나. 그렇지 무언가 하는 동안이니까 during 이 들어가야 하겠구나. 조심조심. 외우자. during this time

9. 참외를 찾으니 melon이라고 나왔고 참외를 깎다 하니 melon peel이라고 나와서 그대로 옮겨 적었더니 내가 봐도 이상하다. 그렇지. cut apples 했으니 peels a melon이라고 해야지. 3인칭에 부정관사에. 호홋. 조심할 것 투성이입니당. 그리고 and 도 이 중간에는 안 쓰는 거다. 중간에 모두 콤마로 해나가다가 마지막에만 and를 쓴다.

10. 쓰다 보니 3인칭 단수임을 잊고 heat에 s를 안 붙였구나. heats

11. 전자레인지는 microwave 임을 기억하자. He heats rice cakes in a microwave.

캬~ 얼마나 멋진 표현이냐. 기억하자. 호홋.

12. 달걀 반숙을 찾으니 soft boiled eggs라고 나와 고대로 옮겨 썼더니 또 틀렸다. 아하

그리고 중간이니까 and를 쓰지 말고 콤마를 써야 한다. 아하. 요렇게.

, boil eggs

13. 중간에 and는 쓰는 거 아니다. 기억하라. and는 마지막에 한 번만. 중간은 모두 콤마로.

14. 베이글 빵에 the가 필요 없구나.

15. a fruit, an onion 그치. a 나 복수형이나 그런 걸 꼭 만들어주어야 한다. 아, 그런데 미치겠다. 중간임에도 and를 놓아둔 것은 뜻이 달라져서일까? 그리고 파프리카에는 그러면 또 왜 a를 붙이지 않을까? 셀 수 없는 명사일까? 나중에 찾아보자. 지금은 늦었다. 졸리다.

16. 앗, 이때는 또 during 이 아니라 while을 쓰는 거네. 시간 있을 때 during과 while의 차이점을 공부해두도록 하자. 오늘은 노노노. 졸리다. 늦었다. 어서어서 끝내자. 틀리기도 참 많이 틀렸다.

17. 하하 나도 참. 요렇게 세련된 문장이 있는 것을.

After finishing our meal

18. 오홋. 커피 마니아라고 쓰면 안 되는 감? 아하 이런데 the 가 아니라 a 구나.

a coffee lover,

19. taste에도 a가 붙네. 세상에. ㅎㅎ

He is not a coffee lover, but he enjoys making a special taste with mixed instant coffee.

새롭게 고쳐쓴 글

I usually don't have breakfast because I am doing an intermittent fasting diet. My diet requires not eating from 7 p.m. to 11 a.m. for 16 hours. I eat my breakfast at 11 a.m. In fact, it's not skipping breakfast, it's eating late. It's possible because my husband usually wakes up very late after retiring. My favorite kinds of breakfast are food that can be eaten very briefly(,) such as bread, eggs, and fruits. Let me explain who prepares them for me. The answer is my husband and I. We are so busy during this time in the kitchen. My husband cuts apples(,) peels a melon, and heats rice cakes in a microwave. I make tomato juice, boil eggs (,) bake bagel bread, apply jam and butter, and put a fruit, an onion, and paprika. We watch TV while we have a meal. There are so many interesting dramas(,) but we enjoy them only during our mealtime. It's our pleasure. After finishing our meal, my husband usually makes special coffee. He is not a coffee lover, but he enjoys making a special taste with mixed instant coffee. His mixed coffee is very good. So I like it so much.

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하, 오늘 나의 문장은 그리 좋지 않았나 보다. 항상 딸려오던 특별 멘트가 없다. 섭섭하다. 그러나 모. 못할 수도 있지. 그럼 그럼. 파이팅!!! 이제 쿨쿨 잠을 자자. 너무 늦었다.

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