Are you a leader or follower?
Today’s Topic
Are you a leader or follower? Tell me your experience when you were a leader or follower.
1. 내가 숙제한 거.
"Please continue to be president." All of the members of 'Misohoi' asked me when we gathered for voting a new president for the new year. I was very surprised because I was a newcomer to that team. What I mean 'newcomer' is no newcomer because I have been there already for almost 2 years. But most members of that team have been there for almost 10 years. The first time when I was there, I was only a guest. Misohoi is a golf circle which has 15 members in it. The president was in an order of ages. I was a president in the last year according to the rule to be the president in orderly by ages. For one year as I was a president, I tried many ways to play golf with a very delightful mind. I want to make all of our members to be happy when they play golf at 'Misohoi Circle'. I tried to know the name's of each one. They are very young. I am the oldest. But I feel they like me. How do I know that? I like them. It means that they also like me. We enjoy playing golf.
2. 첨삭되어 온 거
"Please continue to be (a) president." All of the members of '(")Misohoi'(") asked me when we gathered for voting a new president for the new year. I was very surprised because I was a newcomer to that team. What I mean '(")newcomer'(") is no(not a) newcomer because I have been there already for almost 2(two) years. But most members of that team have been there for almost 10 years. The first time when I was there, I was only a guest.
Misohoi is a golf circle which has 15 members in it. The president was in an order of ages. I was a president in the last year according to the rule to be the president in orderly by ages. For one year as I was a president, I tried many ways to play golf with a very delightful mind. I want to make all of our members to be happy when they play golf at '(")Misohoi Circle'.(.") I tried to know the name's(names) of each one. They are very young. I am the oldest. But I feel they like me. How do I know that? I like them. It means that they also like me. We enjoy playing golf.
3. 내가 기억해야할 것들
1. 관사는 어떻게든 꼭 붙여야하는구나.
Please continue to be a president.
2. 작은 따옴표가 없구나. 언제나 우리 글에선 작은 따옴표로 쓸만한 제목이나 이름 등에 영어에서도 작은 따옴표를 쓰면 꼭 큰 따옴표로 첨삭되어 온다. 요렇게.
All of the members of "Misohoi" asked me when we gathered for voting a new president for the new year.
What I mean "newcomer" is not a newcomer because I have been there already for almost two years.
I want to make all of our members to be happy when they play golf at "Misohoi Circle."
3. 마침표는 따옴표 안에 쓴다.
I want to make all of our members to be happy when they play golf at "Misohoi Circle."
마침표 부분은 참 이상하다. "Misohoi Circle". 문장의 끝이니 이렇게 마침표가 따옴표 밖에 와야할 것 같은데 언제나 따옴표 안으로 쓰라고 첨삭되어온다. 우리말과 다른가보다.
4. 그 어떤 경우에도 관사를 붙여야한다.
not a newcomer
5. 글 중에 나오는 10 이하 숫자는 아라비아숫자로 쓰지 않는다.
What I mean "newcomer" is not a newcomer because I have been there already for almost two years.
6. 하하 요건 명백한 나의 실수다. 각 사람들의 이름들을 알려고 노력했다니까 복수형이 되어야하는데 소유격을 쓰다니... 검토를 좀 신중하게 해야겠다.
I tried to know the names of each one.
4. 그리고 내가 좋아하는 특별 멘트
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5. 첨삭받은 대로 고쳐 쓴 문장
"Please continue to be a president." All of the members of "Misohoi" asked me when we gathered for voting a new president for the new year. I was very surprised because I was a newcomer to that team. What I mean "newcomer" is not a newcomer because I have been there already for almost two years. But most members of that team have been there for almost 10years. The first time when I was there, I was only a guest.
Misohoi is a golf circle which has 15 members in it. The president was in an order of ages. I was a president in the last year according to the rule to be the president in orderly by ages. For one year as I was a president, I tried many ways to play golf with a very delightful mind. I want to make all of our members to be happy when they play golf at "Misohoi Circle". I tried to know the names of each one. They are very young. I am the oldest. But I feel they like me. How do I know that? I like them. It means that they also like me. We enjoy playing golf.
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