your house?
How did you find your current house (newspaper, word of mouth, real estate agent etc.)? Was it easy to find? How many other places did you look at? Why did you choose your house?
I found my current house through a newspaper. There is always a report when a new real estate is open, and there is always a model house where we can feel bad or good to live. The reason why I chose my house is as follows: First, there is a small mountain just in front of the apartment which has 23 floors. I can see the sky and trees in front of the house every season. They are so beautiful and fantastic. The view of my house is so beautiful.
The second reason is that the back view of my home shows the full secenery of the city. It is another beauty on the contrary to the front view which is very country style with the mountain. My elder brother who lives in the U.S.A. always says "it's veryh special" whenever he visits my home. How is it possible that the house can have both merits of the country style's beauty and the city life's convenience. The front view is very country style, but the rear view is very modern. It's so convenient and makes me feel I am living in the country. Hence, my brother said that he likes my house.
오늘 내가 교정받아 기억해야 할 것들.
1. the 가 아니라 a newspaper이고
아파트가 아니라 a real estate is open 이라 하고
2. as follows 다음엔 반드시
콜론 찍고 대문자로 First 하고 콤마,
요케 ㅋㅋ
as follows: First,
the는 필요 없다.
The first 라 하지 말고
그냥 First 라할 것.
3. according to the seasons는
every season으로. 아하 그냥 그것만으로도
계절마다 라는 뜻이 되는구나. 그렇네.
훨씬 세련된 표현이다.
4. the full scenery of the City 가 아니라
소문자 city 아항 함부로 대문자 쓰는 거 아니구나.
city 평소엔 소문자로 쓰는 거다. 외우자.
5. in U.S.A. 가 아니라
in the U.S.A. the를 꼭 붙여야 한다. 기억하자.
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