Do you schedule out
what you have to do every week?
by
Mar 7. 2023
Today’s Topic
Do you schedule out what you have to do every week? Do you make a schedule for every day?
1. 내가 쓴 글
No, I don't schedule out what I have to do every week or every day. I hate to schedule what I have to do. I like doing what I want to do every time so I don't schedule anything. However my husband is completely opposite with me. He always schedule what he has to do on the week or on the day. If we were to go to travel, he is so busy to make a schedule during our traveling time. How ridiculous he is. He spends all of his time to study and to schedule what we have to do during our travel time. Instead I don't do it. When we go to travel, I felt vividly what I feel at that moment. He has much knowledge about that place, but I'm not. It makes me more energetic to know and feel for the first time. My husband already knew about that place so much, because he studied so much it through the articles or books. How boring it is to see what he has already known places. I'm there for the firs time, so I can enjoy that place so much.
2. 첨삭되어 온 글
No, I don't schedule out(X) what I have to do every week or every day. I hate to schedule what I have to do. I like doing what I want to do every time(,) so I don't schedule anything.
However(,) my husband is completely opposite with me. He always schedule(s) what he has to do on the week or on the day.
If we were to go(X) to travel, he is (would be) so busy to make a schedule during our traveling time (trip).
How ridiculous he is.(BETTER: He's so ridiculous.) He spends all of his time to study and to schedule what we have to do during our travel time (trip).
Instead(,) I don't do it. When we go to travel, I felt (feel) vividly what I feel at that moment. He has much knowledge about that place, but I'm (I do) not. It makes me more energetic to know and feel for the first time.
My husband already knew about that place so much, (X) because he studied so much it(X) through the(X) articles or books.
How boring it is to see what he has already known places.(BETTER: It must be boring to see places he already knows so much about.) I'm there for the first time, so I can enjoy that place so much.
3. 내가 기억해야 될 것들
No, I don't schedule out(X) what I have to do every week or every day. I hate to schedule what I have to do. I like doing what I want to do every time(,) so I don't schedule anything.
schedule out은 계획 짜다라고 나와있던데 굳이 이 문장엔 그렇게 쓸 필요가 없나 보다. 그런데 제목에 있어서 그대로 썼는데 그걸 또 틀렸다고 첨삭되어 오다니 그것 참 이상하다.
so 앞에는 콤마를 써주자.
However(,) my husband is completely opposite with me. He always schedule(s) what he has to do on the week or on the day.
However 뒤에 반드시 콤마 써줄 것.
He 니까 동사 뒤에 s를 붙여줘야지. 실수! 하하
If we were to go(X) to travel, he is (would be) so busy to make a schedule during our traveling time (trip).
가정법엔 그냥 were to 면 충분하다.
travel이면 충분하다. 굳이 go to travel이라 할 필요 없다.
If절 아닌 거엔 무조건 과거형 동사. 옛날 학창 시절 그렇게나 외우던 가정법 용법.
our trip 이면 간단히 해결되는 것을 traveling time 이라니 하하.
How ridiculous he is.(BETTER: He's so ridiculous.) He spends all of his time to study and to schedule what we have to do during our travel time (trip).
오호, 굳이 감탄법을 쓰지 말라고라. 아하. He's so ridiculous. 오케이.
during our trip. 그래 간략하게.
Instead(,) I don't do it. When we go to travel, I felt (feel) vividly what I feel at that moment. He has much knowledge about that place, but I'm (I do) not. It makes me more energetic to know and feel for the first time.
Instead 뒤에 반드시 콤마!
앞에 현재형 썼으니 뒤에도 현재형 써야지. I feel vividly...
do동사엔 do로 받아야지 갑자기 왜 비동사를! 아이고!
My husband already knew about that place so much, (X) because he studied so much it(X) through the(X) articles or books.
because앞에 반드시 콤마 필요하다고 외운 것 같은데 아닌가? 콤마를 없애라 하네.
여기선 it이 필요 없구나.
정관사도 필요 없구나.
How boring it is to see what he has already known places.(BETTER: It must be boring to see places he already knows so much about.) I'm there for the first time, so I can enjoy that place so much.
감탄문을 별로 좋아하지 않으시는구나. 하하 함부로 감탄문을 만드는 게 아닌가 보다.
It must be boring to see places he already knows so much about.
4. 특별히 딸려온 첨삭자의 멘트.
Thank you for doing Step 4. We hope you are doing well. You shared good ideas in your essay. You did your best to explain your thoughts. You may study the corrections we provided to help you revise and improve your writings. We are sure that you can make an even better composition in the future. Good luck! :)
넵! 열심히 하게씀돠! 하하
Note:
Future Unreal (Second Conditional)
- used for situations that are not true now (Counterfactual): If I weren’t here, I would be at home sleeping.
사실이 아닌 미래.
지금 사실과 반대되는 상황.
내가 여기 없다면 지금 집에서 자고 있을 텐데.
Pattern: If [noun] + [simple past tense] + (,) + [noun] + would [verb]
Remember: The be-verb is always "were" in the second conditional
아하 여긴 패턴이 있군. 그치 학창 시절 얼마나 외웠냐.
If 명사 + 과거동사 + , 명사 + would 동사
반드시 기억할 것.
여기서 be동사는 반드시 were 여야만 한다.
Examples:
If I were to design a hotel, I would place it in the central city.
If I were the president, I would lower taxes.
내가 호텔을 짓는다면, 도시 한가운데 있게 할 것이다.
내가 대통령이라면, 세금을 내릴 것이다.
기억하자. 반드시 were!!!
5. 첨삭받은 대로 고쳐 쓴 글
No, I don't schedule what I have to do every week or every day. I hate to schedule what I have to do. I like doing what I want to do every time, so I don't schedule anything.
However, my husband is completely opposite with me. He always schedules what he has to do on the week or on the day.
If we were to travel, he would be so busy to make a schedule during our trip.
He's so ridiculous. He spends all of his time to study and to schedule what we have to do during our trip.
Instead, I don't do it. When we go to travel, I feel vividly what I feel at that moment. He has much knowledge about that place, but I do not. It makes me more energetic to know and feel for the first time.
My husband already knew about that place so much, because he studied so much through articles or books.
It must be boring to see places he already knows so much about. I'm there for the first time, so I can enjoy that place so much.
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