What type of people
do you get along with best?
Today’s Topic
What type of people do you get along with best?
1. 내가 쓴 글
I like the people who usually talk about good things. I don't like the people who talk about bad things about other people. I hate them. As I know, the people who enjoy talking about others badly usually have negatives in the world. They always seem to be looking for flaws in people. In the future, those people may talk about me badly to others either. I don't like such people. I like the people who talk about others good. I'm happy when I listen to them talking about good things about people even though they are not there. Such words as "She is so kind." "He is considerate." make me happy. I like people who speak many good things, especially about others. How nice they are when they talk about others well. It's easy to talk about someone badly. Therefore if the person says about someone, especially about someone who is not there, good then that person looks great. I feel that I like that person so much. I like people who are very positive about the things and the people around the world. How wonderful it is to think about the world well.
2. 첨삭되어 온 글
I like the people who usually talk about good things. I don't like the people who talk about bad things about other people. I hate them. As I know, the people who enjoy talking about others badly usually have negatives in the world. They always seem to be looking for flaws in people. In the future, those people may talk about me badly to others either. I don't like such people. I like the people who talk about others good(good about others). I'm happy when I listen to them talking about good things about people even though they are not there.
Such words as(,) "She is so kind.(,)" "He is considerate.(,)" make me happy. I like people who speak many good(OR: positive) things, especially about others. How nice they are when they talk about others well. It's easy to talk about someone badly. Therefore(,) if the person says (good) about someone, especially about(when that) someone who(X) is not there, good(X) then that person looks(I will look at that person) great(positively). I feel that I like that person so much. I like people who are very positive about the(X) things and the people around the world. How wonderful it is to think about the world well.
3. 내가 기억해야할 것들
a. 동사와 전치사 사이에 꾸미는 말을!
talk good about others
say good about others
b. such as, therefore 다음엔 콤마
Such words as, "She is so kind," "He is considerate," make me happy.
Therefore, if the person says good about someone, especially when that someone is not there, then I will look at that person positively.
c. 따옴표안이라도 문장 중에 있으면 쉼표로 (요건 좀 이상하다. 따옴표 안에 나름 한 문장인데 마침표가 아니라 콤마? 그럴려면 문장 앞도 대문자가 아닌 소문자로 써야하지 않을까?)
Such words as, "She is so kind," "He is considerate," make me happy.
d. 좋은 걸 말하다는 긍정적인 걸 말하다로. 즉 good 은 positive 로.
I like people who speak many positive things, especially about others.
4. 그리고 딸려온 특별 멘트
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