How do you feel

when someone has been untruthful to you?

Today’s Topic

How do you feel when someone has been untruthful to you? Tell me the story briefly.

1) 내가 쓴 글

How do I feel when someone has been untruthful to me? Who? Who was untruthful to me? In order to tell you the story briefly, I think about it for 3 hours, but I couldn't find the good story about it. I couldn't remember anything about the person who was untruthful to me. I think about even my elementary school days friend. But I couldn't find the person who was untruthful to me. Why? It is because of my character I think. I don't remember the bad things and I only remember the good things. There might be a person who was untruthful to me in my life, but I couldn't remember anything at all because of my character. So I changed my mind from thinking about the person who was untruthful to me but telling honestly how difficult I am to remember such an untruthful person. Yes, I don't remember bad things or bad people. I only remember good things and a good person. How wonderful it is. How wonderful the world is. I have no time to think about an untruthful person because I need much more time to think about the person truthful to me.

2) 첨삭되어 온 글

How do I feel when someone has been untruthful to me? Who? Who was untruthful to me? In order to tell you the story briefly, I think(thought) about it for 3(three) hours, but I couldn't find the(a) good story about it. I couldn't remember anything about the person who was untruthful to me. I think about even my (friends during) elementary school days(.) friend.(x) But I couldn't find the person who was untruthful to me. Why? It is because of my character I think. I don't remember the bad things(,) and I only remember the good things. There might be a person who was untruthful to me in my life, but I couldn't remember anything at all because of my character. So I changed my mind from thinking about the person who was untruthful to me but(into) telling honestly how difficult I am(it is for me) to remember such an untruthful person. Yes, I don't remember bad things or bad people. I only remember good things and a(x) good person.(people.) How wonderful it is. How wonderful the world is. I have no time to think about an untruthful person because I need much more time to think about the person truthful to me.

3) 내가 기억해야 할 것들

1. 시제! 그렇다. 시제는 항상 신경 써야 한다. 깜빡했다.

In order to tell you the story briefly, I think(thought) about it for three hours, but I couldn't find a good story about it.

2. 숫자! 9까지는 풀어서 영어로. 그 이상은 숫자로!!! 바로 전에 했으면서 또 틀리다니!!! 바보!!!

In order to tell you the story briefly, I thought about it for 3(three) hours, but I couldn't find a good story about it.

3. a 냐 the 냐를 좀 더 신중하게 생각하고 쓰도록 하자. 일반적인 이야기이니까 a가 맞다.

In order to tell you the story briefly, I thought about it for three hours, but I couldn't find the(a) good story about it.

4. 문장을 쓸 때 자연스럽게 써지도록 좀 더 생각하자. 초등학교 친구들~ 요런 방식은 우리말 순서이고 영어는 일단 친구들을 써주고 언제의 친구... 요렇게 되어야 한다.

I think about even my (friends during) elementary school days(.) friend.(x)

5. and 앞에선 콤마!!!

I don't remember the bad things(,) and I only remember the good things.

6... 에서..으로 바뀌는 거니까 into

So I changed my mind from thinking about the person who was untruthful to me but(into) telling honestly how difficult it is for me to remember such an untruthful person.

7. how difficult it is... 요런 식의 문장이 되어야 함. 기억하자.

So I changed my mind from thinking about the person who was untruthful to me into telling honestly how difficult I am(it is for me) to remember such an untruthful person.

8. person은 개인 한 명, people은 여러 사람. 그러니까 여기에선 people라고 썼어야 했다.

I only remember good things and a(x) good person.(people.)

4) 첨삭받은 대로 고쳐 쓴 글

How do I feel when someone has been untruthful to me? Who? Who was untruthful to me? In order to tell you the story briefly, I thought about it for three hours, but I couldn't find a good story about it. I couldn't remember anything about the person who was untruthful to me. I think about even my friends during elementary school days. But I couldn't find the person who was untruthful to me. Why? It is because of my character I think. I don't remember the bad things, and I only remember the good things. There might be a person who was untruthful to me in my life, but I couldn't remember anything at all because of my character. So I changed my mind from thinking about the person who was untruthful to me into telling honestly how difficult it is for me to remember such an untruthful person. Yes, I don't remember bad things or bad people. I only remember good things and good people. How wonderful it is. How wonderful the world is. I have no time to think about an untruthful person because I need much more time to think about the person truthful to me.

5) 그리고 딸려온 특별 멘트

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오홋. 아주 잘 썼다고 우선 칭찬을 받고. 헤헤 아 좋아라. 넵 열심히 조언을 받겠씀돠.

1. A comma is not needed after coordinating conjunctions (such as and, but, so) when they start a sentence. But a comma is needed before them when they are between two clauses. However, when the two clauses are too short, the comma can be omitted.

1. and, but, so로 문장을 시작할 때는 콤마가 필요 없다.

EXAMPLES:
Those people are wonderful and optimistic. So hanging out with them helps me a lot.

They are really nice people, so I hang out with them.
My friends are cheerful people. And they like attending joyful events.
They are cheerful, and they like hanging out.
Those people are wonderful and optimistic. But I don't hang out with them a lot.
They are wonderful people, but they don't like going out.

I like you and you like me.

아하. 문장을 잘라서 so, but, and... 요런 거이 문장 맨 앞에 오게 되면 콤마가 필요 없다. 당연하지. 오데 쓸껴? 히히 그러나 문장 중간에 들어가면 꼭 and, but, so 앞에는 콤마를 찍어주라. 오케이~

2. General Rule: Spell out whole numbers (as well as ordinal numbers) 0-9 and use figures for numbers 10 and above (examples: zero, one man, five years, 10 boxes, 96 people, 104 books, ninth floor, 15th floor).

2. 숫자 0부터 9 까지는 단어로 스펠링을 써줄 것. 10 이상은 그냥 아라비안 숫자로. zero, one man, five years, 10 boxes, 96 people, 104 books, ninth floor, 15th floor.... 알고있씀돠. 다음엔 꼭 주의하게씀돠.

EXAMPLE:
Please give Arthur four pencils with erasers and 15 blank sheets of paper to complete the assignment.

꼭 외우자. 9 까지는 zero로 시작하여 one two three... 요렇게 알파벳으로 써주고 10부터는 아라비안 숫자로 쓴다. 꼭 기억하자. 오케이. 파이팅!!! 하하 푸하하하 아무데서나 튀어나오는 파이팅!!!

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넵. 아주 많은 도움이 되었습니다. 열심히 하겠습니다. 계속하겠습니다. 감사합니다.

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