Do you think you have

a healthy eating habit?

Sep 4. 2020

Today’s Topic

Do you think you have a healthy eating habit?

1. 내가 쓴 글

Yes, I do. I think I have a healthy eating habit. Why? It is because of "Seven to Eleven." What does it mean by that? That's my slogan. It means that I will not have any meals from seven p.m. to eleven a.m. the next day. I'm on an intermittent fasting diet now. It requires not eating for 16 hours. It helps me a lot to be very comfortable with my stomach. I feel very good on an empty stomach. It makes me have much time to do what I want to do such as reading books and writing articles. So I can confidently say that I have good eating habits. Besides, I enjoy cooking at home. At first, I wasn't. I was a woman who loved eating out. But my husband likes to eat at home so much that so did I. He likes eating Soybean Paste Soup with Bean Rice and Vegetables. I make many kinds of kimchi. I made kimchi by myself, but after he retired, we make it together. He helped me a lot doing such as trimming the scallions, peeling the garlic, and lifting the heavy cabbage. We enjoy it together.

2. 첨삭되어 온 글

Yes, I do. I think I have a healthy eating habit. Why? It is because of "Seven to Eleven." What does it (do I) mean by that? That's my slogan. It means that I will not have any meals from seven (7:00) p.m. to eleven (11:00) a.m. the next day. I'm on an (doing) intermittent fasting diet(X) now. It requires not eating for 16 hours. It helps me a lot to be very comfortable with my stomach. I feel very good on an empty stomach. It makes me have much time to do what I want to do such as reading books and writing articles. So I can confidently say that I have good eating habits. Besides, I enjoy cooking at home. At first, I wasn't (didn't). I was a woman who loved eating out. But my husband likes to eat at home so much(,) that (and) so did I. He likes eating Soybean Paste Soup (soybean paste soup) with Bean Rice (bean rice) and Vegetables (vegetables). I make many kinds of kimchi. I made kimchi by myself, but after (since) he retired, we make (have made) it together. He helped (helps) me a lot doing(X) such as trimming the scallions, peeling the garlic, and lifting the heavy cabbage. We enjoy it together.

3. 기억해야 할 것들

1) 오호 내가 주어가 돼야 하는구나. 그렇지.

What do you mean by that? 요렇게 주로 쓰지 않았던가.

What does it (do I) mean by that?

2) 시간을 말할 땐 아라비아 숫자로 쓸 것.

It means that I will not have any meals from seven (7:00) p.m. to eleven (11:00) a.m. the next day.

3) I'm doing intermittent fasting now. 아하 요렇게 되어야 하는구나. 다이어트 중이라고 밝히려는 거였는데 다이어트니 그런 말은 필요 없는가 보다.

I'm on an (doing) intermittent fasting diet(X) now.

4) enjoy 니까 do 동사를 써야지. 바보.

Besides, I enjoy cooking at home. At first, I wasn't (didn't).

5) 아하 이럴 때 that 이 아니라 and를 쓰는구나.

But my husband likes to eat at home so much(,) that (and) so did I.

6) 쓸데없이 대문자를 쓰지 말자.

He likes eating Soybean Paste Soup (soybean paste soup) with Bean Rice (bean rice) and Vegetables (vegetables).

7) 퇴직하고는 함께 해왔다. since를 쓰고 현재 완료형으로

I made kimchi by myself, but after (since) he retired, we make (have made) it together.

8) 시제는 현재로, doing은 필요 없고.

He helped (helps) me a lot doing(X) such as trimming the scallions, peeling the garlic, and lifting the heavy cabbage.

4. 맞게 고쳐 쓴 글

Yes, I do. I think I have a healthy eating habit. Why? It is because of "Seven to Eleven." What do I mean by that? That's my slogan. It means that I will not have any meals from 7:00 p.m. to 11:00 a.m. the next day. I'm doing intermittent fasting now. It requires not eating for 16 hours. It helps me a lot to be very comfortable with my stomach. I feel very good on an empty stomach. It makes me have much time to do what I want to do such as reading books and writing articles. So I can confidently say that I have good eating habits. Besides, I enjoy cooking at home. At first, I didn't. I was a woman who loved eating out. But my husband likes to eat at home so much, and so did I. He likes eating soybean paste soup with bean rice and vegetables. I make many kinds of kimchi. I made kimchi by myself, but since he retired, we have made it together. He helps me a lot such as trimming the scallions, peeling the garlic, and lifting the heavy cabbage. We enjoy it together.

5. 그리고 딸려온 특별 멘트

Thank you for completing Step 4. You have the ability to express your ideas with confidence and eloquence. It is nice to see your ability to apply more complex grammatical structures. Continue to strive for great writing every time. Enjoy your afternoon! :)