What type of social activities
do you engage in?
Today’s Topic
What type of social activities do you engage in? If there's no activity you enjoy, what activity would you like to try?
1. 내가 쓴 글
I engaged in teaching Korean to foreigners. I visited them at their house. There were Uzbekistan, Vietnam, and Japanese. Let me tell you one episode of them. She was a very young woman from Vietnam. When I visited her on a sunshine afternoon, there was her father in law and a baby. Her husband was working at the office and I found he was handicapped through the picture. It was a very small house. For a full day, she was with her father in law at home. And there was a big dog in a very small yard. She studied very hard but there were so many interruptions such as a crying baby and her father in law asking to give milk to that baby. She was so busy taking care of her father in law and the baby. In front of us, she gave her milk to her baby. I felt it's dangerous when her father in law was watching and giving milk from her naked breast. It's too small to stay with them altogether. Her father in law looked very healthy. I said to her in secret to give milk in her own room not here.
2. 첨삭받은 글
I engaged in teaching Korean to foreigners. I visited them at their house. There were Uzbekistan, Vietnam(Vietnamese), and Japanese. Let me tell you one episode of them. She was a very young woman from Vietnam. When I visited her in the sunshine (sunny) afternoon, there was her father(-) in(-) law and a baby. Her husband was working at the office and I found he was handicapped through the picture. It was a very small house. For a full day, she was with her father(-) in(-) law at home. And there was a big dog in a very small yard. She studied very hard but there were so many interruptions such as a crying baby and her father(-) in(-) law asking to give milk to that baby. She was so busy to take care of her father(-) in(-) law and the baby. In front of us, she gave her milk to her baby. I felt it's dangerous when her father(-) in(-) law was watching and giving milk from her naked breast. It's too small to stay with them altogether. Her father(-) in(-) law looked very healthy. I said to her in secret to give milk in her own room not here(there).
3. 내가 기억해야 할 것들
1) 베트남과 베트남인은 다르지. 암.
There were Uzbekistan, Vietnam(Vietnamese), and Japanese.
2) 햇빛 찬란한 날은 선샤인이 아니라 써니. 그렇지 선샤인은 명사잖아. 꾸미는 게 아니지.
When I visited her on a sunshine (sunny) afternoon, there was her father(-) in(-) law and a baby.
3) 오호 시아버지 할 때는 대시를 붙여줘야 하는구나
When I visited her in the sunny afternoon, there was her father(-) in(-) law and a baby.
4) 여기가 아닌 너의 방에서 모유를 주라고 비밀리에 말했다에서 여기니까 here를 썼는데 따옴표를 써서 직접화법이라면 here 가 맞겠지만 간접화법이니까 there가 맞는 것 같다. 주의하자.
I said to her in secret to give milk in her own room not here(there).
4. 첨삭받은 대로 고쳐 쓴 글
I engaged in teaching Korean to foreigners. I visited them at their house. There were Uzbekistan, Vietnamese, and Japanese. Let me tell you one episode of them. She was a very young woman from Vietnam. When I visited her on a sunny afternoon, there was her father-in-law and a baby. Her husband was working at the office and I found he was handicapped through the picture. It was a very small house. For a full day, she was with her father-in-law at home. And there was a big dog in a very small yard. She studied very hard but there were so many interruptions such as a crying baby and her father-in-law asking to give milk to that baby. She was so busy taking care of her father-in-law and the baby. In front of us, she gave her milk to her baby. I felt it's dangerous when her father-in-law was watching and giving milk from her naked breast. It's too small to stay with them altogether. Her father-in-law looked very healthy. I said to her in secret to give milk in her own room not there.
5. 그리고 딸려온 내가 좋아하는 특별 멘트
Thank you for completing Step 4. Based on your level, you amazingly lived up to our expectations. In fact, you were even better. Congratulations! You clearly showed your extensive knowledge of English grammar and vocabulary. Moreover, you already sound like a native English speaker. We’ll be here to help you improve your English writing skills every step of the way. Keep writing. :)
오호호호호홋 아주 잘 썼다는 이런 칭찬은 너무너무 좋아라~ 하핫
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