Which jobs are prestigious?

Today’s Topic

In your opinion, which jobs are most prestigious? Why?

prestigious: 명망 있는

1. 내가 쓴 글

In my opinion, a writer is the most prestigious job. Why? A writer could get a lot of money and get a famous popular and get an honor. For the more, if he or she likes it as a job, how wonderful it is. I can enjoy reading and writing books and if I could get the money with it, how great it is. So I think, the most prestigious job is to get a job which he likes the most. If I could get a job with what I like the most, then it could be the most prestigious job. Even though it is a so-called prestigious job, but if he doesn't like it as a job, then how poor he would be. So I think it is the most important to find what I like the most as a job. I like reading books and writing articles. If I could get a job as a writer, how great it would be. What I like the most is my job. How wonderful it is. I only dream it and the dream will come true. It is the most prestigious job to do what he likes most.

2. 첨삭되어 온 글

In my opinion, a writer is the most prestigious job. Why? A writer could get a lot of money and get a(become) famous popular(X) and get an honor. For the more(Furthermore), if he or she likes it as a job, how wonderful it is(would it be). I can enjoy reading and writing books(,) and if I could get(OR: earn) the(X) money with it, how great it is(would it be). So I think, the most prestigious job is to get a job which he likes the most. If I could get a job with what I like the most, then it could be the most prestigious job. Even though it is a so-called prestigious job, but if I don't like it as a job, then how poor he would be.(SUGGESTION: would he be?) So I think it is the(X) most important to find what I like the most as a job. I like reading books and writing articles. If I could get a job as a writer, how great it would be. What I like the most is my job. How wonderful it is. I only dream it and the dream will come true. It is the most prestigious job to do what he likes most.

3. 기억해야 할 것들

1) A writer could get a lot of money and get a(become) famous popular(X) and get an honor.

유명해진다는 그냥 간단하게 become famous

2) For the more(Furthermore), if he or she likes it as a job, how wonderful it is(would it be).

Furthermore를 어떻게 이렇게 썼을까? 바보. 외우자. Furthermore.

그리고 많이 듣던 제대로 된 가정법 How wonderful would it be!

3) I can enjoy reading and writing books(,) and if I could get(OR: earn) the(X) money with it, how great it is(would it be).

and 앞에는 반드시 콤마.

earn money. 여기 관사는 필요치 않다. earn the money가 아니라 그냥 earn money.

how great would it be. 외우자 이 표현을 자꾸. how great would it be.

4) Even though it is a so-called prestigious job, but if he doesn't like it as a job, then how poor he would be.(SUGGESTION: would he be?)

외우자. 이 문장 형태를.

How poor would he be?

5) So I think it is the(X) most important to find what I like the most as a job.

most 앞에는 무조건 정관사 the가 붙는 줄 았았는데 아니구나. 하하

4. 그리고 내가 좋아하는 특별 멘트

Thank you for finishing Step 4. You were detailed and expressive with most sentences. Let me share some advice. Be mindful of the spelling of some words. You can also say "How wonderful would it be if I like my job the most."

가정법 옛날에 많이 외웠던 건데. 기억하자.

How wonderful would it be if I like my job the most.

Future Unreal (Second Conditional)
- used for situations that are not true now (Counterfactual): If I weren’t here, I would be at home sleeping.

Pattern: If [noun] + [simple past tense] + (,) + [noun] + would [verb]

Remember: The be-verb is always "were" in the second conditional

Counterfactual: 조건법적 서술

어떤 문장의 첫 절이 사실과 정반대인 것.

만약 내가 알고 있었다면 if I had known 따위.

If 명사 + 단순 과거 , 명사 + would 동사

여기서 Be 동사는 반드시 were 가 되어야 한다.

Examples:
If I were to design a hotel, I would place it in the central city.

If I were the president, I would lower taxes.

If I were to design a hotel, I would place it in the central city.

내가 만약 호텔을 디자인한다면, 도시 한가운데 배치했을 텐데.

If I were the president, I would lower taxes.

내가 만약 대통령이라면, 세금을 줄여줄 텐데.

아하. 요 거이 바로바로 그 유명한 If 가정법이구나. 외우자.

If I were..... , I would...

I hope this helps. Stay creative! Keep it up!

넵! 많은 도움이 되었습니다.

5. 첨삭받은 대로 다시 고쳐 쓴 글

In my opinion, a writer is the most prestigious job. Why? A writer could get a lot of money and become famous and get an honor. Furthermore, if he or she likes it as a job, how wonderful would it be. I can enjoy reading and writing books, and if I could earn money with it, how great would it be. So I think, the most prestigious job is to get a job which he likes the most. If I could get a job with what I like the most, then it could be the most prestigious job. Even though it is a so-called prestigious job, but if he doesn't like it as a job, then how poor would he be? So I think it is most important to find what I like the most as a job. I like reading books and writing articles. If I could get a job as a writer, how great it would be. What I like the most is my job. How wonderful it is. I only dream it and the dream will come true. It is the most prestigious job to do what he likes most.

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